tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.comments2024-02-28T15:15:50.388+13:00Room 20 Cyber KidsKirstin Anderson-McGhie (Keamac)http://www.blogger.com/profile/00724907406423207265noreply@blogger.comBlogger643125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-71038445968696421522013-12-02T09:29:57.910+13:002013-12-02T09:29:57.910+13:00Great long story Great long story Cyber Kidshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10509047261386827493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-35068559597625429512013-12-02T09:25:13.870+13:002013-12-02T09:25:13.870+13:00I like you're story James. I like you're story James. <br />Cyber Kidshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10509047261386827493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-43901584992049116002013-11-28T13:54:54.925+13:002013-11-28T13:54:54.925+13:00Nice story james.Nice story james.Cyber Kidshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10509047261386827493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-77531148714894349772013-11-22T10:47:09.103+13:002013-11-22T10:47:09.103+13:00To James and Mrs McGhie
Well done on a nice achiev...To James and Mrs McGhie<br />Well done on a nice achievement it is great to see what you guys have done excellent.<br /><br />From Cooper and Room 20Cyber Kidshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10509047261386827493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-19337275989111516672013-11-22T10:42:59.621+13:002013-11-22T10:42:59.621+13:00nice long story james. Nice climbing
Francoisnice long story james. Nice climbing<br />FrancoisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-87622993259619091982013-10-31T09:29:07.879+13:002013-10-31T09:29:07.879+13:00Awesome story Holly! I don't really think ther...Awesome story Holly! I don't really think there's anything you need to improve on there!<br />BellaBellanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-81369735191476444982013-10-31T09:27:15.458+13:002013-10-31T09:27:15.458+13:00Self esteem: We also need to know how to improve o...Self esteem: We also need to know how to improve our self esteem before it goes out of control.<br />BellaBellanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-2833555789977421272013-10-27T00:20:56.122+13:002013-10-27T00:20:56.122+13:00Hi Holly,
I really enjoyed reading your 100 word c...Hi Holly,<br />I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge. You used different adjectives and adverbs to make your writing interesting to read. You've managed to build up suspense in your story which can sometimes be tricky to do, I really want to know what happens next!!! Keep up the good work! <br />Miss WilliamsMiss Williamshttp://hopwoodclass11.primaryblogger.co.uk/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-20284841207129827402013-09-19T09:55:39.793+12:002013-09-19T09:55:39.793+12:00Hi Brooke how are feeling ? I liked when you said ...Hi Brooke how are feeling ? I liked when you said '" I found my real father".Well I think your post was amazing wow.Edennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-36404539805448126252013-09-19T09:24:53.779+12:002013-09-19T09:24:53.779+12:00Hi Dana that was a really good report about bullie...Hi Dana that was a really good report about bullies I learnt lots from that.<br /><br />From Nikita Cyber Kidshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10509047261386827493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-51613450401545922992013-09-13T11:48:06.887+12:002013-09-13T11:48:06.887+12:00hi brooke, thanks i dont know what gave me the ide...hi brooke, thanks i dont know what gave me the idea.<br />kirstyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-8333835246682319962013-09-12T13:43:36.920+12:002013-09-12T13:43:36.920+12:00That sounds intresting and it must be a cool subje...That sounds intresting and it must be a cool subject to learn about.<br /><br />From Juliet and Caitlin.<br /> <br /> <br />Room 11 NSnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-80114965707270465242013-09-12T12:36:22.973+12:002013-09-12T12:36:22.973+12:00To Liam
From Illya
Yeah. I think minecraft is cool...To Liam<br />From Illya<br />Yeah. I think minecraft is cool but I don't really believe in herobrineCyber Kidshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10509047261386827493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-10572672699106654852013-09-11T10:00:16.473+12:002013-09-11T10:00:16.473+12:00Cool Dana!
I like the describing sentences you use...Cool Dana!<br />I like the describing sentences you used and also the complex sentence: "Suddenly a drop of rain raced down to my glassess and made me look for somewhere to cover myself from the rain."<br />Maybe next time you should check for typos though!<br />SaanaRoom 18https://www.blogger.com/profile/16235072132061104186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-9434640809857526582013-09-10T00:40:52.220+12:002013-09-10T00:40:52.220+12:00It must be awful to live in a place where you get ...It must be awful to live in a place where you get tsunamis. You chose a really good photo to go with your writing. I am not certain I have linked to the right piece for the 100 Word Challenge as I didn't see the prompt used but thought I'd leave you a comment anyway.<br />I thought your writing was clever, giving the tsunami a personality and particularly liked the idea that it didn't recycle but just left its rubbish on the ground.<br />Well done for taking part in the challenge.Lynda D (Team 100WC)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-20566209793841963412013-09-06T10:21:05.713+12:002013-09-06T10:21:05.713+12:00Oh sorry just dreyden
Oh sorry just dreyden<br />Cyber Kidshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10509047261386827493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-966424060241064102013-09-06T09:54:30.712+12:002013-09-06T09:54:30.712+12:00From Illya
To Ryan
I made this when 1.6.2 was out ...From Illya<br />To Ryan<br />I made this when 1.6.2 was out and my favourite server is hivemc.eu<br /><br />Thanks for the comments!<br />Cyber Kidshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10509047261386827493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-59076211974770310352013-09-04T09:39:39.831+12:002013-09-04T09:39:39.831+12:00Hi Kirsty
You have done an amazing post!
What gav...Hi Kirsty <br />You have done an amazing post!<br />What gave the idea?brookenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-28491136424426962122013-09-04T09:34:41.810+12:002013-09-04T09:34:41.810+12:00Hi
Also love the similies and great description!
...Hi <br />Also love the similies and great description!<br />But who is the person who wrote this?Brookenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-91634204959743171762013-09-04T09:19:01.647+12:002013-09-04T09:19:01.647+12:00Hi
I liked all the similies, but who wrote this?Hi<br />I liked all the similies, but who wrote this?Jananoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-50144690891761560722013-09-04T09:16:29.545+12:002013-09-04T09:16:29.545+12:00Hey Holly,
I loved your description in this, why d...Hey Holly,<br />I loved your description in this, why did you choose to do it about a tornado?Jananoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-68252940436287999302013-09-02T12:21:03.155+12:002013-09-02T12:21:03.155+12:00Great poem
I really like your topic
I love the ...Great poem<br /> I really like your topic <br /> I love the describing words <br /><br />from jacyntaRoom 18https://www.blogger.com/profile/16235072132061104186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-80188973556185613512013-09-02T12:19:16.920+12:002013-09-02T12:19:16.920+12:00hi Brooke,
cool poem.
why do you choose avalanche...hi Brooke,<br />cool poem. <br />why do you choose avalanche?<br />WenRoom 18https://www.blogger.com/profile/16235072132061104186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-55612616316275237152013-09-02T12:15:57.146+12:002013-09-02T12:15:57.146+12:00 I love your poem and the beautiful description.
... I love your poem and the beautiful description.<br /><br />Why did you choose Volcano?<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Emily<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Room 18https://www.blogger.com/profile/16235072132061104186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192709739237000792.post-34886931688763743632013-09-02T12:15:04.785+12:002013-09-02T12:15:04.785+12:00I love the topic Illya and a very good storyI love the topic Illya and a very good storyRoom 18https://www.blogger.com/profile/16235072132061104186noreply@blogger.com