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Monday, March 19, 2012

Guess How I am Feeling

I’ve got butterflies in my tummy. I feel like a hammers pounding in my head. My hands are covering my mouth and my face is turning green. Yucky brown-green stuff is coming out of my mouth. It feels horrible when it comes out. OH NO! I think I will do it again. I hate it when this happens.

By Rory

11 comments:

  1. hi Adam that was good detail keep it up.

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  2. Nervous about something?

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  3. Nervous about something?

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  4. this is a good paragraph about how a character feels good job

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  5. this is a good paragraph about how a character feels good job

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  6. When you be sick like Goldie on X factor

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  7. nevouse about something

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  8. Nervous about something

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  9. Nervous...... :)

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  10. This is good but some dosent make sense

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  11. This could be something that you are really nervous. what could it be

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