**My 10 minute writing assesment**
Tears streamed down my little face as I fell through the clouds. No. This couldn't be happening. "Mama!" I cried. She couldn't hear me, I was too far away. I would never see her again. I hit the ground with a thud and shivering, I curled up into a ball on the cold, hard ground.
Many years passed. My life was lonely. Empty. Whenever I thought about that fateful day it was too painful to bear. So I set out on a mission. I would find her, I had to. I searched and searched, but I couldn't find her. I gave up all hope and sat down on a stump. To my surprise it shot up and up and up. In fact, it reached the clouds! I hopped off, eager to explore. I might find Mama here! I mean, this was where I last saw her.
I searched and searched, stepping through layers of thick, poofy, bouncy cloud. Then I saw her. She was sitting in a pile of flowers, weeping. "Mama!" I yelled. She looked up, tears in her eyes.
By GT :)
To grace
ReplyDeleteYour sample was cool!
Well done GT, it was an amazing assement! Especially as you wrote it in 10 mins.
ReplyDeleteTo Grace
ReplyDeleteCool story! It is very interesting, i'd love to hear the end of it. Why was the mother crying?
K.R.M
To Kirsty
ReplyDeleteThe mother was crying at the end because she thought she wouold never see the child again.
G.T
Amazing story Grace.I liked the part we the stork shot up too the clouds.
ReplyDeleteNathanSaid
ReplyDeleteThat was very discreptive and very interseting
Dear Grace
ReplyDeleteI loved your story! I especially really liked how you ended it. Great job!
Awesome!! I loved the story. ALthough, why was the mother crying? Did she stop? Was she crying because of losing her son? Did something else bad happened? other than that I loved your story and I hope you write more. :)
ReplyDeleteTo K.R.M,
ReplyDeleteThanks! Well, I guess she was crying because she was sad and she thought she wouldn't see the child again.
G.T
To Holly M.
ReplyDeleteThanks! - G.T
To Eden,
ReplyDeleteThank you!
G.T
Thanks Nathan
ReplyDeleteG.T
To emo890
ReplyDeleteThanks! The mother was crying because she thought she would never see the child again. G.T