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Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Tornado

Dangerous muncher
On a stormy winters day
On the cold smashed ground
When hot and cold air swaps
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5 comments:

  1. genellAugust 15, 2013 at 11:44 AM

    hi Shantae
    i think you used intersting words
    why did you pick that topic ?

    genell

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  2. Holly MAugust 20, 2013 at 9:11 AM

    Hi Shantae
    I really liked your poem!
    I thought you used really detailed words,
    And you could imagine it in your head!

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  3. Holly MAugust 20, 2013 at 9:12 AM

    Hi Shantae
    I really liked your poem!
    I thought you used really detailed words,
    And you could imagine it in your head!

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  4. BrookeAugust 23, 2013 at 12:09 PM

    Hi Shantae
    I think that you chose an awesome topic and you used some interesting words!
    Are you really interested in that topic?

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  5. JanaAugust 28, 2013 at 11:19 AM

    Hey Shantae,
    I really liked how you used description in your poem!
    Are you doing this topic for your inquiry?

    ReplyDelete

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