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Thursday, June 20, 2013

As I walked through the creaky door BOO, a clown jumps out at me,I scream. I run through the passage way screaming my head off. Someone turns the light on.
By Nikita
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2 comments:

  1. Room11June 24, 2013 at 11:24 AM

    Very funny story.I really liked it


    Edward and Sean

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  2. JanaAugust 6, 2013 at 12:07 PM

    I liked how you used onomatopoeia in this sentence.
    Jana

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