Creak creak went the stairs as I walked into the haunted house. Creak I opened the squeaky door. Bang Bang there was no escaping I saw another flite of stairs creak creak bang the step I was on snapped. I had a felling I will never get out of this crazy house. Oohhh what was that sound oohhhh there it was again I started biting my finger nails. I looked straight i front of me and there was a a a a ghost i ran but he was to fast i saw a knights armour. I put it on and ran suddenly the armour stoped moving and pulled out a sword and fought the ghost. I jumped out of the armour and started runing again a skeliten started fighting me I ran and ran. i didn't know what to do i looked at the front door it was open. I made a break for it yes I have got out i'm never going back there wake up wake up what I fell asleep in class.
By Kaeleb
Francois said...
ReplyDeleteGreat story but you forget some full stops and spelling
But otherwise great story kaeleb
nice story you need to ad full stops and rivise edit and proof read kaeleb dreyden
ReplyDeletegood story i like the part when you woke up in class
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