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Thursday, August 29, 2013

Dear Tsunami...


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Dear Tsunami...
You always turn up in a fashionable way. You don't recycle you just carry your rubbish anywhere. Once you're gone you leave the place in a bombsite like in WW1 and 2. Please just be you not the scareful monster.

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By Holly K

1 comment:

  1. It must be awful to live in a place where you get tsunamis. You chose a really good photo to go with your writing. I am not certain I have linked to the right piece for the 100 Word Challenge as I didn't see the prompt used but thought I'd leave you a comment anyway.
    I thought your writing was clever, giving the tsunami a personality and particularly liked the idea that it didn't recycle but just left its rubbish on the ground.
    Well done for taking part in the challenge.

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