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Wednesday, August 7, 2013

My Safari Poem.

I went on a safari and I saw 10 leopards leaping through the shady forest.
9 spider monkeys swinging on the big green vines.
8 giraffes chomping on at the tall trees.
7 elephants stomping on the muddy ground.
6 deers drinking the glittering oasis.
5 lions catching their prey.
4 tigers sleeping in the big green bushes.
3 zebras scampering across the ground.
2 jaguars screeching in the wind.
1 snake slithering up a tree.

By Izzy
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 8, 2013 at 11:22 AM

    Nice poem.
    Has lots of description.
    Kirsty

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  2. Room 18September 2, 2013 at 11:48 AM

    Cool poem Izzy!
    I liked the way you counted down instead of up.
    How did you get the idea and did you really go on a safari?
    Hanae

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