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Wednesday, August 14, 2013

The earthquake

Earthquake
shaking the tall buildings
on a hot peaceful day
destroying my home town
i think the earth is just banging together

by Genell 
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3 comments:

  1. Cyber KidsAugust 14, 2013 at 11:50 AM

    hi kaeleb here

    I really liked the story
    why did you chosse that topic

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  2. genellAugust 14, 2013 at 12:03 PM

    hi kaeleb
    i picked this topic because i am intersting in earthquakes

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  3. Room 18September 2, 2013 at 12:21 PM

    Great poem
    I really like your topic
    I love the describing words

    from jacynta

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