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Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Volcano

           




       Angry Volcano


  • Destroying every thing in its way and around it 
  • lives in a village
  • an a hot and windy summer day 
  • it is angry so its spits out lava
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12 comments:

  1. Cyber KidsAugust 14, 2013 at 11:32 AM

    i really like your poem but i am wondering who did this but it is really interesting

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  2. Cyber KidsAugust 14, 2013 at 11:33 AM

    i really like your poem but i am wondering who did this but it is really interesting





    by souraya

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  3. sourayaAugust 14, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    i really like your poem but i am wondering who did this but it is really interesting




    :) :p
    by souraya

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  4. sourayaAugust 14, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    i really like your poem but i am wondering who did this but it is really interesting




    :) :p
    by souraya

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  5. sourayaAugust 14, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    i really like your poem but i am wondering who did this but it is really interesting




    :) :p
    by souraya

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  6. sourayaAugust 14, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    i really like your poem but i am wondering who did this but it is really interesting




    :) :p
    by souraya

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  7. sourayaAugust 14, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    i really like your poem but i am wondering who did this but it is really interesting




    :) :p
    by souraya

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  8. sourayaAugust 14, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    i really like your poem but i am wondering who did this but it is really interesting




    :) :p
    by souraya

    ReplyDelete
  9. sourayaAugust 14, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    i really like your poem but i am wondering who did this but it is really interesting




    :) :p
    by souraya

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  10. Mary CooperAugust 14, 2013 at 3:29 PM

    Nice poem, but who is the author?

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  11. Room 18August 23, 2013 at 12:05 PM

    Hi cool poem.
    I liked the idea.
    why did you chose volcanoes for your poem?

    Kaiya:)

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  12. Room 18September 2, 2013 at 12:15 PM

    I love your poem and the beautiful description.

    Why did you choose Volcano?




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