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Thursday, September 19, 2013

100 word challenge



I was walking down the street it was dark and empty.
It was a ghost town! I am lost, I am scared, I am alone.
BANG! BANG! BANG!
"Who's that? What's there? Where am I?"
And then I saw a bright light!
It was blinding and hurting my eyes.
"Don't worry young one you're safe with me"
His voice was familiar, rough and musty, but old and gentle.
I knew his voice from somewhere, but where?
But then something interrupted my thoughts.
“Come on kid get in the car, Mum’s waiting for us”
“DAD!”

I had found my REAL FATHER!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Brooke how are feeling ? I liked when you said '" I found my real father".Well I think your post was amazing wow.

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