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Monday, September 2, 2013

The swirling Tornado

The Swirling Tornado

Throwing debris in all directions
On a calm Californian day
For half an hour
Why? He hates pollution

By Holly K.









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1 comment:

  1. JanaSeptember 4, 2013 at 9:16 AM

    Hey Holly,
    I loved your description in this, why did you choose to do it about a tornado?

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