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Thursday, June 20, 2013

Horror House

Creack I stop now I look behind methe door is closing slowlycrash the roof is falling ahh I run as fast as I can out the door oof "muahahahaha you've fell strate into my trap now your going to die" pow I'veknock dracula out ooooooooooohhhhhhhhh you've knocked master out ahhhh
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2 comments:

  1. Cyber KidsJune 20, 2013 at 12:03 PM

    sorry I've forgot to put my name in but it's dreyden

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  2. Cyber KidsJune 20, 2013 at 12:16 PM


    Kaeleb said
    nice story but need full stops and better spacing

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