Showing posts with label By Manaal. Show all posts
Showing posts with label By Manaal. Show all posts

Monday, March 12, 2012

Can You Guess How Im Feeling?

We have been learning to describe how we are feeling without telling the reader.

Moments!
I kept on pushing myself I couldn’t handle any more. I kept my place in fifth. One more lap to go I could do it. But soon I had to breathe through my mouth; and it felt so dry like a parched desert my legs felt like jelly. I could see the finish line barely on the horizon fifty strides and then I could make it. But for some reason my legs suddenly felt like steel blocks but I didn’t stop I kept on pushing myself and then just then... yes I did it I crossed the finish line!

By Manaal