10 minute writing assesment

                                                **My 10 minute writing assesment**

Tears streamed down my little face as I fell through the clouds. No. This couldn't be happening. "Mama!" I cried. She couldn't hear me, I was too far away. I would never see her again. I hit the ground with a thud and shivering, I curled up into a ball on the cold, hard ground.

Many years passed. My life was lonely. Empty. Whenever I thought about that fateful day it was too painful to bear. So I set out on a mission. I would find her, I had to. I searched and searched, but I couldn't find her. I gave up all hope and sat down on a stump. To my surprise it shot up and up and up. In fact, it reached the clouds! I hopped off, eager to explore. I might find Mama here! I mean, this was where I last saw her.

I searched and searched, stepping through layers of thick, poofy, bouncy cloud. Then I saw her. She was sitting in a pile of  flowers, weeping. "Mama!" I yelled. She looked up, tears in her eyes.

By GT :)