A Poem of Love and Hate
Love
Love is a brilliant hot pink
It smells like hot cocoa on a cold day
It tatses like melted marshmallows
Love sounds like a rooster crowing
It feels like a warm room in winter
It looks like snow falling gently on to the ice
Love lives in someones heart!
Hate
Hate is a rough navy blue
It smells like revenge brewing up
It tastes like burnt pikelets
Hate sounds like bones clicking
It feels like mushy peas in my hands
It looks like an angry wilderbeast
Hate lives alone in a box!
By Brooke
3 comments:
Dear Brooke
I love the way you described the colours of love as brilliant and hate as rough.You did a great job of doing the opposite of an abstract noun.
From Holly K.
Hi Brooke!
I love your poem and the descriptive words you used.
Dear Brooke,
I really like how you described love and hate!
From Jana
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