Guess How I Am Feeling

The Invader was one of the coolest rides at Rainbow’s End. As I climbed onto the platform I was so excited that my knees were trembling. While l was waiting in the queue, I thought, “It will be a very exciting ride!” Finally, when it was my turn, I hopped onto the dark-blue machine. It started when everyone was strapped in and ready. It got faster and faster, until all of the riders, including me and Dad, were shrieking as the ride swirled around the blue track taking us all with it! Finally, the ride slowed down and came to a stop. We all staggered off the Invader, which was now swirling other people around its fast track.

By Kayla

Show Not Tell

I was freaking out, my heart was pumping fast. My whole body was sweating and I was shaking. Suddenly I ran and hid behind a chair then everyone started laughing. All around me I heard laughter - Ha ha ha ha ha HA!!!!!! My stomach felt like there were giants moving around inside. I couldn’t bear to face the crowd. Then suddenly the laughter vanished like thin air, because there was a girl on stage singing like a kea. Everyone there was so enchanted by her voice that she blushed red. Then she finished and everyone was quiet. Afterwards she went back behind the curtains and a joker came out of the curtains. After a while I knew why everyone was laughing at me, that was because I was I was supposed to be a joker – I’d done the wrong thing. I went out of my place where I was hiding after the other joker went back in the curtains. Then I started telling jokes and everyone started laughing again.
By Giane

Guess How I Was Feeling

My family went to my uncle’s house - there was a swimming pool. Liam and I were only two or three years old. My dad and mum were chatting to my uncle and we were playing tag. It was fun for a while then I asked my dad if I could go for a swim. I took my clothes off, and then I put one foot in and then the other foot. It was warm so I went down one step, then I went down another step... The water was past my head so I drowned! Travis saved me like he was a lifeguard.
I was crying when I came out.
By EE

How Am I Feeling?

As we watched the video, I had shivers and a trembling feeling travelling through my body. The movie was giving me a headache so I turned it off. “Hey!” said my friend as she walked over to the scooters. “Let’s go on these then,” she muttered slowly. I felt my pizza coming up as I flew in the wind. The cold breeze in my face was so soft and silky. As we went round a wiggly park, (now I could definitely feel my pizza). I saw teenagers; my friend whispered to me,
“Turn back now they are obviously up to something bad as you can see it in their faces.” I shivered several times as I turned around, “Let’s go home now” I answered.
How am I feeling?

By Zoe

Show not Tell

As I walked onto the stage I started to twirl and twirl. I had a smile on my face. I leaped and spun and the audience cheered. It felt great. I walked of the stage. I watched some of the other dancers dance while I was sitting on a chair. The other dancers ended it with a bow. It was so fun watching the other dancers dance. Then it was my turn to go back on stage. I spun around and jumped and landed in first. This is so fun I thought. I went off the stage. It was the end of the show and I went home. It was a really fun day. At home I danced more. It was one of the best days of my life.

By Ellie

Show Not Tell

I stepped into my room all I saw was with a big fat ugly troll sitting on the bed. I started screaming at her - it was my sister! I felt like a big monster with a volcano in my tummy. I ran down the stairs screaming, I was so upset because I had been cleaning my room for the whole afternoon. Would you like it if your brother or sister came in your room and messed it up? I bet not. Also, guess what! She did not even tidy it up! So I kept annoying Mum but she said she was too busy and Dad was at golf. So I was a troll and did to her room what she did to mine. Guess how I’m feeling?
By Nikita

Can You Guess How I Was Feeling?

The ride started, I couldn’t get off. I felt the safety belt, it squeezed me really hard. I saw my friends going round and round, we were getting dizzy. We looked like we were going to slip off our seats and fall on the concrete. We were very high above the ground; I heard screaming all around me. I felt the butterflies fluttering in my tummy. Finally it stopped, I felt very dizzy.






By Sana

Can You Guess How I Was Feeling?

I was in the airport saying goodbye to my family, my eyes were pouring out with tears. As I walked into the plane I thought what a lucky child I am, but I was not that lucky because I was leaving my friends and family. That night as I was going to sleep my mind just burst out with memories. I couldn’t stop thinking about my family. Then my dad, sitting next to me, said I must take deep breaths and relax. In the morning I woke up and ate my breakfast. Then my dad told me that we were in Dubai.


By Shanna

Show Not Tell - Guess How I'm Feeling.

I was freaking out (in a good way). I stepped inside my room, because my parents said
’’Don’t go in there...’’
’’Why couldn’t I go in there my parents were frightening me Ohno!’’ I said to myself
That was what I heard them say or I just didn’t hear it properly. My heart was pumping faster than a cheetah running, faster than a person crying wait...that’s not even fast but you get the picture. I had an iPod!
OMG, I just could not believe that, I also had an alarm clock, radio, charger altogether. Then suddenly I heard footsteps
’’BOOM BOOM’’
My sister said
’’Happy birthday big sis, I hope you enjoy your surprise gift.’’

By Manishka

EMBARRASSING MOMENTS

My cheeks were as red as a rose; my face went from white to crimson. I had just done something in front of the whole school. The room went from silent to a type of fun house, people laughing at me everywhere I looked! I wanted to run! I wanted to hide! I wanted to yell - STOP!!!!!
By Taylor