Thursday, June 20, 2013

Horror House

Creack I stop now I look behind methe door is closing slowlycrash the roof is falling ahh I run as fast as I can out the door oof "muahahahaha you've fell strate into my trap now your going to die" pow I'veknock dracula out ooooooooooohhhhhhhhh you've knocked master out ahhhh

2 comments:

Cyber Kids said...

sorry I've forgot to put my name in but it's dreyden

Cyber Kids said...


Kaeleb said
nice story but need full stops and better spacing