Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Tornado

Dangerous muncher
On a stormy winters day
On the cold smashed ground
When hot and cold air swaps

5 comments:

genell said...

hi Shantae
i think you used intersting words
why did you pick that topic ?

genell

Holly M said...

Hi Shantae
I really liked your poem!
I thought you used really detailed words,
And you could imagine it in your head!

Holly M said...

Hi Shantae
I really liked your poem!
I thought you used really detailed words,
And you could imagine it in your head!

Brooke said...

Hi Shantae
I think that you chose an awesome topic and you used some interesting words!
Are you really interested in that topic?

Jana said...

Hey Shantae,
I really liked how you used description in your poem!
Are you doing this topic for your inquiry?