Thursday, March 15, 2012

Can You Guess How I Am Feeling?

We have been learning to describe how we are feeling wih out telling the reader. Can you guess how i am feeling?


I was walking down the path and I saw a monkey. What the???? Why is there a monkey on the path in the corner? It was very weird. I wonder if it is nice. It was strange. It was scared but I wasn’t.
I went up to it and it jumped on me, I guess it liked me. When we got home it saw the chess board and it started playing it. Then it saw my homework and then the monkey started to do my homework for me and it got everything right.
I didn’t know what to say. He could do everything that a human can do. He was a smart monkey. It was so so.... Before I could say anything, he put on my brothers clothes. It was around night time and he ate my brother’s food and went into my brother’s bed. It was very strange. But I saw a zipper at the back of him and I pulled it down and it was a person??? It was my brothers fooling me.


By S.R

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

cool as post

jazzy said...

shocked, weird, happy.... i don't know. apart from that really good

JJ

emmalee said...

i really like paragraphs about feelings so i like this post

Anonymous said...

Really annoyed, i have a brother too and he is always trying to pull tricks on me. But he doesn't succeed!

Anonymous said...

Really annoyed, i have a brother too and he is always trying to pull tricks on me. But he doesn't succeed!