Tuesday, March 13, 2012

Can You Guess How I Am Feeling?

We have been learning to describe our feelings without telling the reader

I told myself not to look down, I was at Tree adventures. I was so high up my hands were shaking. I thought the plank would collapse and the harness would break and I would fall. I felt like I was 100 metres in the air but I was only like 40 metre high. My head had a picture of nothing. I did not know what was going on. My friend Jordan helped me across; I was so relieved that I made it across.

By Thomas

1 comment:

charli said...

Are you feeling shocked or relieved