Friday, March 16, 2012

Show Not Tell

My whole body was shaking, like jelly. I couldn’t stand up straight. I was sweating madly as my mum was driving me to my new school. My heart was beating like a drum. I wanted to run and hide. As I walked out of the car I had butterflies in my stomach, I felt really sick and had a headache. As I walked into the class everyone greeted me with stony silence. When the teacher came up to me I stood there quietly looking at her. As I sat down everybody started looking at me.
“What should I do now?” I said in my head.
I introduced myself to the person next to me and then I started making new friends.
By Madison

1 comment:

charli said...

It is realy good but is it better than your last school?